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"The Ancient" Tectonic Yuna


Preferred User Nickname:
Yuna

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[In Progress]

Villain Name:
[Title] The Ancient
[Name] Tectonic Yuna

Age:
Unknown [explained in History]

Gender:
Female

Physical Description:
Self Conscious, self formed rock being.

Weapon of Choice:
Shield

Powers:
Geokenetic[Earth]
 
Movement Type:
Skimming

History:
Thump Thump Thump
"Yuna" eyes shifted open, hills formed.
Thunder and lightning with the sound of a meteor coming through the atmosphere
"Yuna" Cringed in pain as her skin was burned.
pitter patter
"Yuna" moved her hand, the lands split.
The ground rumbles as armies march on foot
This is where her story "begins".

As the armies march past a human like form walks out of the Mountain side. Looking around the armada screams and runs, the being raises a hand and the earth shifts crushing a hand full of pink beings that spurt out red liquid.

One of the pink things shout, though incomprehensible to the being she senses that there is going to be danger. She shields her self and he very earth throws up its defenses to protect her. The pink soft, easily kill able angry things stab and lunge at her with the very earth she was born from.

The being growls and the very earth rumbles, slamming her fist into the ground she sends shock waves out killing most of the pink things. The being walks back into the mountain, the pink things start to "worship" the mountain. The being listens and starts to understand the sounds coming from the pink things walking on her. The were known as humans, more like evolved forms of apes to it.

The being walks out of the mountain again, this time there is a building next to her. Humans scream and bow kneeling before her. With a graveled voice it speaks, "Why are you bowing, get up do not bow to me I am but a child of Gaia." Walking over she lifts one of the humans up realizing how light they are and fragile, it dies from its grip around the humans neck.

"My lady," one of the humans say, "do not be cross with us we are here for you."

"Lady," the being says as she looks down, sure enough she looked like one of the human females. Dropping the human in her hand the other humans hurry and drag the body to the fire pits and toss it in. The fire hisses and the being growls, the earth rumbles. "Put that out now!" she says as she closes her hand and the earth envelops the fire pit. "If you are going to be here [sign in to see URL] temple yes?" she looks at one of the humans it nods at her saying 'yes'. "then there is to be no fire in here, if you can not see learn, if you can not feel, learn. The earth provides for those whom listen and learn" The being walked to a wall and formed a chair and sat down closing her eyes.

-years pass-

The being opens her eyes and her temple is in ruins, pillars crumbling, walls are all but gone. Waving her hand the temple reforms around her. A scream is heard from inside the temple and a female human runs of and stops looking up at the being of earth, her breath caught in her throat. The being simple looks at her as she finishes her work, careful to to harm the human. Clearing he throat the earth being looks at the females feet, eventually so does the human ans she moves. The being fixes the last bit of floor.

"[sign in to see URL] are the daughter of [sign in to see URL] ancient [sign in to see URL] have called you Yuna" the human says. Yuna speaks, her voice gravelly and harsh; "So they gave me a name did they, I like it. Where did all the humans that lived here go?"

"Lady Yuna the last time you where awake was over a thousand years ago," the humans says, "we humans do not worship the earth..."

Yuna growled, the earth rumbled. "The earth is life, where do you think your food comes from? Who holds the water you so blatantly use? Who lets you walk on her as you please? Destroy her as you please? Use her very skin to make your toys?" Yuna was cross as she spoke but calmed down as the wind blew through her 'home'. The human was cowering in the corner a puddle forming around her feet. "You get up we are going out side," she moved to walk outside, the human stopped her. "Lady Yuna i think some clothes would be appropriate first."

As Yuna got dressed picking out clothing that she found fascinating she and the human walked out of her temple and into the light of day.

[to be continued]
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Re: "The Ancient" Tectonic Yuna


Please add some criticism to my history.

if you think something needs to be changed, just don't blow past the central [sign in to see URL] is "the Ancient" tectonic Yuna for a reason xD
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Re: "The Ancient" Tectonic Yuna


The image I have in my mind from reading your history, is one of great size, I picture Yuna being 50 feet tall. But after careful reading I think perhaps that was not your intent? The imagery suggests it, but some of her actions make her seem almost normal height, like the dressing.

Also, why is this character a villain? What makes them not only commit villainy, but not also side with the heroes?

What is this characters weaknesses, you mentioned fire at one point, do you have that aspect fully thought out? This is an army-ender level character, having their powers fully thought out will be very helpful for you in the future.

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Re: "The Ancient" Tectonic Yuna


thank you thank you

i will make some minor tweaks here and [sign in to see URL] her alignment is more chaotic neutral...

and i will work on her "height" but that might take a second. and the army ending [sign in to see URL] is more like she had no control over her powers as a "new" born so to speak.
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